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Not bad

My only suggestion is to add a bit more variety in timbre. The same sound gets really old after awhile. Other than that, nice work. The semi-chaotic tempo/rhythms oddly work for this song. Sounds fun! :D

Espiongold responds:

thank you I will. I have much more songs to bring

Nice job!

I'm not an expert in chiptunes, but this is great stuff. Relaxing! When you said it got a little more crazy at 1:40, I was expecting something extreme like death chip music or something, haha. But when I heard it, I was pleasantly surprised :)

Awesome job

HolyKonni responds:

:D thank you!

Very good

The choir melody after the techno started was a bit obscure for this piece, in my own opinion. However, after it got going there were no other obscure melody moments, haha.

I am also a fan of the constructive chords your using. They give a very nice and "angelic" sound to this piece overall. Great transitions from the choral to techno and back again. I also liked the bass drum at the end, although after a few measures of it, I thought you could have brought in a harder attack like you have going on beats 2 and 4 after the techno fades out and the voices come back in (if you know what I am talking about).

Overall, great piece. I enjoyed listening to it. There IS something missing, but it does not diminish the piece at all. I liked it a lot. I hope your hiatus brings you much creativity, because I DEFINITELY want to hear more of your stuff!

Cheers!

Aeris responds:

This is a really good review ^^

I do admit, the techno/choir isn't really meshing too well but I think it's because my mind couldn't decide if it wanted to do either or, rather than what I wanted to do was mesh them seamlessly, but it has its moments i'll admit where it's smooth.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chords, they're one of the things I put the most intricacy in, or most attention to i should say. I understand what you mean by the bass drum and I think I have an idea that'll satisfy that.

Thanks for this amazing review :D btw, I always respond to reviews if you've sent any others around. ^^

-Aeris.

Awesome

Great Song! The repetiveness doesn't really affect it. It's like it was meant to be!

Anyways, great music! And yes, it is FUN!!!!!!! A little bit of variation would be nice, but a piano version is always good. The tempo shift is amazing, it makes it that much better.

Dan Paladin would be proud :')

- Momo

WritersBlock responds:

Yeah, I'm thinking I can vary the rhythms a bit, and maybe have a hyper fast section. I like the ending now, so I'll probably go med-slow-med (/w variation)-fast-slow.

This style is a breath of fresh air for me, thanks for the review and 10.

Awesome

Great song, nice sounds, awesome singer.

Overall Awesome. Can't wait to hear the full version!

- Momo

DjKavi responds:

niether can i lmfao

Good!

It was definitely good. The only thing I didn't like about it was in the beginning the background loop wasn't precisely on pitch. I just cringed a little when I heard it. It's like a quarter0-tone.... Ooof. Either way, though, it was still good

^.^

- Momo

Dj-Rippa responds:

Thanx you very muchhhh:D!!!

Very cool!

I loved it! It had awesome vocals, and I loved the intro!

Keep up the good work!

- Momo
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Bosa responds:

Thanks for the review, even though the voting system sucks ass now.

Pretty far out!

Wow! This was a good song! I loved how everything just went together perfectly. All the parts where there and they flowed together well!
The vocals were good too, Natty's a good singer :p

Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait to hear more!

- Momo
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Rig responds:

She sure is. By the way, here's the story on how this song came to be:

I wrote some loops using free software, put them on <a href="http://www.splicemusic.com">www.splicemusic.com</a>, and arranged a song called "Mindless Adventure". Along came Natty, who heard the song and recorded some vocals over it. I found that version and liked it a lot!
So I downloaded her vocals, remastered my loops in FL Studio with her wonderful voice. and here's the result.

By the way, I'll be putting all the individual loops onto <a href="http://www.splicemusic.com">www.splicemusic.com</a>, so you can remix it if you want!

Very nice.

That's an overall great song. Do you mind me asking what do you use to make your songs?

NemesisTheory responds:

FL Studio 5! (5.0.2) I think I need to update in the near future. >:

You won't know me until you know it.

Yeah

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