Not bad
My only suggestion is to add a bit more variety in timbre. The same sound gets really old after awhile. Other than that, nice work. The semi-chaotic tempo/rhythms oddly work for this song. Sounds fun! :D
Not bad
My only suggestion is to add a bit more variety in timbre. The same sound gets really old after awhile. Other than that, nice work. The semi-chaotic tempo/rhythms oddly work for this song. Sounds fun! :D
thank you I will. I have much more songs to bring
Nice job!
I'm not an expert in chiptunes, but this is great stuff. Relaxing! When you said it got a little more crazy at 1:40, I was expecting something extreme like death chip music or something, haha. But when I heard it, I was pleasantly surprised :)
Awesome job
:D thank you!
Very good
The choir melody after the techno started was a bit obscure for this piece, in my own opinion. However, after it got going there were no other obscure melody moments, haha.
I am also a fan of the constructive chords your using. They give a very nice and "angelic" sound to this piece overall. Great transitions from the choral to techno and back again. I also liked the bass drum at the end, although after a few measures of it, I thought you could have brought in a harder attack like you have going on beats 2 and 4 after the techno fades out and the voices come back in (if you know what I am talking about).
Overall, great piece. I enjoyed listening to it. There IS something missing, but it does not diminish the piece at all. I liked it a lot. I hope your hiatus brings you much creativity, because I DEFINITELY want to hear more of your stuff!
Cheers!
This is a really good review ^^
I do admit, the techno/choir isn't really meshing too well but I think it's because my mind couldn't decide if it wanted to do either or, rather than what I wanted to do was mesh them seamlessly, but it has its moments i'll admit where it's smooth.
I'm glad you enjoyed the chords, they're one of the things I put the most intricacy in, or most attention to i should say. I understand what you mean by the bass drum and I think I have an idea that'll satisfy that.
Thanks for this amazing review :D btw, I always respond to reviews if you've sent any others around. ^^
-Aeris.
Awesome
Great Song! The repetiveness doesn't really affect it. It's like it was meant to be!
Anyways, great music! And yes, it is FUN!!!!!!! A little bit of variation would be nice, but a piano version is always good. The tempo shift is amazing, it makes it that much better.
Dan Paladin would be proud :')
- Momo
Yeah, I'm thinking I can vary the rhythms a bit, and maybe have a hyper fast section. I like the ending now, so I'll probably go med-slow-med (/w variation)-fast-slow.
This style is a breath of fresh air for me, thanks for the review and 10.
Awesome
Great song, nice sounds, awesome singer.
Overall Awesome. Can't wait to hear the full version!
- Momo
niether can i lmfao
Good!
It was definitely good. The only thing I didn't like about it was in the beginning the background loop wasn't precisely on pitch. I just cringed a little when I heard it. It's like a quarter0-tone.... Ooof. Either way, though, it was still good
^.^
- Momo
Thanx you very muchhhh:D!!!
Very cool!
I loved it! It had awesome vocals, and I loved the intro!
Keep up the good work!
- Momo
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Thanks for the review, even though the voting system sucks ass now.
Pretty far out!
Wow! This was a good song! I loved how everything just went together perfectly. All the parts where there and they flowed together well!
The vocals were good too, Natty's a good singer :p
Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait to hear more!
- Momo
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She sure is. By the way, here's the story on how this song came to be:
I wrote some loops using free software, put them on <a href="http://www.splicemusic.com">www.splicemusic.com</a>, and arranged a song called "Mindless Adventure". Along came Natty, who heard the song and recorded some vocals over it. I found that version and liked it a lot!
So I downloaded her vocals, remastered my loops in FL Studio with her wonderful voice. and here's the result.
By the way, I'll be putting all the individual loops onto <a href="http://www.splicemusic.com">www.splicemusic.com</a>, so you can remix it if you want!
Very nice.
That's an overall great song. Do you mind me asking what do you use to make your songs?
FL Studio 5! (5.0.2) I think I need to update in the near future. >:
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